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Pedals of a rose
The pedals of a rose,
Color matters not.
Red, black, white, etc.
They fall when wilt,
For their time doth come.
Only for others to take their place.
The pedals of rose
Present beauty and tranquility.
Only when death comes are they most beautiful.
We do what must be done.
To preserve them we must.
So that we know not what their true beauty is too late.
The pedals of a rose
Represent a multitude of things.
Abundant in colors and meaning.
They are used for love more than anything.
These precious flowers
Are what we give to represent our love for another.
Our hearts are like the pedals of a rose.
Day after day, more and more pedals wilt.
Showing our fragile lives and the short time we own.
We give our hearts to those we adore and love.
But upon heartbreak,
Do we know the true color of our hearts.
Like Alice in Wonderland,
A rose can be painted.
Heartbreak threatens to paint a rose black.
This by far is true.
Many suffer the black paint.
The pain that is instituted within all humanity.
Dark
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch14
                                        Chapter 14
  (A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
  “Sir, there’s critical damage to the engines,” spoke one of the technicians to Kuyo.
  “Well fix them!” he barked.
  “We’re trying sir. But most of our men are focusing on the damage to the main structure. For now, we’re still afloat.”
  “Just make sure we’re still stable in the air!” he growled. “I want to make sure that we don’t crash down before I start my war.”
  “Yes sir.”
  The whole air ship was in an uproa
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch13
                                           Chapter 13
  (A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
  The vampires were trapped within their room the entirety of the next day. Luckily, the fox demon running the entire evil plot of world domination hadn’t hesitated to place a TV and assorted game systems in their room to keep them busy. But that didn’t stop Moka from walking around with cabin fever running through her system.
  “I can’t take it. I simply can’t.”
  “This can’t be the first time you’ve been held up captive on an enemy ship.”
  “At l
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch12
Chapter 12
Moka watched out the window of the room she was being kept in on the Fairy Tale hidden airship. The clouds below were white and seemed like pillows. But Moka couldn’t bring herself to smile given what has transpired. It was next to impossible for her to crack even a smirk for her, Tsukune, and her friends.
The door creaked open and she turned to see who would walk through. Tsukune wobbled inside with his head down low. She ran to him and held him in her arms. “What happened?”
“No one was harmed. The worst thing that transpired was me being hurt in front of them.”
“Oh Tsukune.” Moka instantly squeezed him in sadness.
Tsukune hugged back to comfort. “It’s alright. We’ve been in situations like this before. We’ll get out of them the same way.”
“How? Tsukune we can’t risk the lives of everyone.”
“I’m not saying we will. It’s only a matter of time. No plan goes without a fl
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch11
Chapter 11
‘Where am I? What’s going on? I can’t see anything.’ Tsukune questioned everything as he began to shake out of his unconscious state. His head hurt like someone hit him with a stereo. “Goddamn. I my head hurts like hell.”
“Tsukune?”
He heard Moka’s voice out of the dank darkness. “Moka? Moka, where are you?” he called out.
“I think I’m on your left. Because I hear you on my right. I can’t tell. Everything’s dark.”
“I think we’re blindfolded. Because my eyes are open and I can’t see. I can tell that much.”
“Tsukune, can you move your arms. I think mine are bound by ropes.”
“Same here. I think we’re suspended in mid-air.”
“I see a vampire’s sense of perspective isn’t so dulled after being exposed to a holy cross,” spoke a voice that made both vampires cringe upon each vocal.
“Ts-Tsukune, please tell
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch10
Chapter 10
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
The Saturday before Valentine’s Day started gloriously. At least for the vampire couple. The other girls, including Gin, couldn’t stand the lovey dovey stuff the two were doing day in and day out. To everyone else, they were being annoying, unruly, and overall…obnoxious.
“Please tell me that when Valentine’s Day is over that you’ll stop showing off your love life in our faces,” spoke Kurumu.
“Oh shut it. We just like to love each other. It is February after all. The month of love,” explained Moka.
“Yeah,” spoke Tsukune. “Let us have the month to express our love.”
“I think you guys express it enough with al
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch9
Chapter 9
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Like that one chapter some time ago, I added another made up character that will not make another appearance anytime soon. Take care and read on!)
The bar was actually a lot quieter than Tsukune thought. It was surprisingly calm with some soft jazz playing in the background. Moka’s father led them over to one of the tables set up by a window. He told Tsukune that he liked to see the monsters all roam about outside.
“So, Lord Akashiya,” Tsukune tried to take off the tension and awkward silence.
“My name is Issa Shuzen actually,” corrected the elder vampire. “I would’ve thought you knew that.”
“Right, right. Sorry. I’ve spent so much time using your daughte
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch8
Chapter 8
Another week to pass. The school year seemed to pass by rather quickly (honestly, who hasn’t thought so this far into their school lives?).  The gang of teenage monsters have already put aside all the drama.
“School year’s almost over!” shouted the blue-haired succubus.
“Not all of us are looking forward to it, Kurumu,” spoke Tsukune.
“How come?” questioned Ruby.
“I like to live in the here and now. The present, more than anything right now is bright and happy.”
“I agree,” Moka spoke with a large smile on her face.
“Where’s Yukari? She should’ve been here by now,” spoke Mizore.
And like a dog hearing its name being called, the little witch came through the door with a pale face as though she had seen a ghost. Ruby walked towards the child and tried to shake her out of her daze.
“Yukari? Is something the matter?”
“M-Moka, yo-your father is here.”
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch7
Chapter 7
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
More time had passed since the incident with Tsukune’s outburst. Even Christmas break passed by rather quickly. No one looked like they wanted to return after the incident. Now the month was January and everyone wore a scared face whenever the male vampire walked past them in the halls.
“This guy is going to be the headmaster after graduation?”
“He’s insane!”
“He’s off his rocker!”
“If he can’t control his anger, then he’s unfit to be headmaster.”
Tsukune heard it all in the first couple of weeks after school started back. His parents weren’t too thrilled about his outburst, but they showed him support about
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch6
Chapter 6
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. There is someone I made up to help with my plot for the chapter though. Take care and read on!)
Days soon passed into weeks. Weeks into months. Soon enough, the winter was upon them all. The snow began to fall upon the lands of the monster world. Everyone bundled up to keep warm. Even Tsukune did, even though vampires are more resistant to the cold than any other monster in the universe.
In the time that passed, the young boy looked back on the schoolyear so far. He and Moka finally got together in an actual relationship, he took her out on their first date on Halloween night, and more nights of love making, which now had to be kept to a minimum considering complaints that were given. He tried to push those embarr
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch5
Chapter 5
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
The following week passed by rather quickly for the students of Yokai Academy. Now the first week was over and done with. Tsukune had seen little of the girls after he told them off, but with him and Moka spending after class time together nonstop, it didn’t matter at all.
Now he sat on the roof, overlooking the campus grounds. The sky was clear. The campus was quiet. Everyone was either in class, or in the lunchroom eating.
He was only up there for quiet time. Not that being with Moka was disturbing him or anything. Tsukune only figured that he get time to himself every now and then, like every man has a right to in a relationship. But even without her by his side, he felt emotionall
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch4
Chapter 4
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
The first day of the new year at Yokai Academy started off without a hitch. Nothing went wrong all day and all was peaceful. The staff told Tsukune that they’d take care of everything within the principal’s power until he graduated his final year. Now, the day was done and everyone was one their way to the dorms.
Tsukune stayed however. While everyone headed back to the dorms, he went to the principal’s office. The room was dark and the windows were painted dark purple. The room also carried an aroma of cinnamon and certain spices that reminded the young vampire of his mother’s cooking. He took in deep breaths to remember the scent.
“Tsukune?”
Tsukune tur
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch3
Chapter 3
The sun shined through the window. It shined in the eyes of the silver haired vampire girl, thus awakening her from what seemed to be a blissful dream. Moka soon realized she wasn’t her bed. She found out she lay naked on the floor with someone’s arm wrapped around her.
She rolled over, careful as to try and not disturb who had their arm around her. Her eyes widened when realizing that Tsukune laid beside her. He too was also stripped down. What’s more is that his Holy Lock had been removed, giving him his own white, vampire hair. Her face lit up like a Christmas light and instantly burned by whatever wires emitted the bright light covered in red.
She told herself to move out of his grasp, but something told her not to move at all. Something called out that she needed to stay here. It spoke to her and said Tsukune’s grasp was her home. It was her own private island that granted everything she needed, when she needed it.
Tsukune lightly fidgeted though
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To Care
To care for a being
Does not mean that you need to be related.
It simply means
That you must have a kind heart.
To care for someone
Is to show how well you were raised.
It is to show
Who you want to be.
The world is dark.
The world is cruel.
You must be able to find the light
That'll snuff out the dark.
Though demons and angels keep loved ones apart,
They cannot keep the love away.
Love travels great distances.
Love travels through many eras.
To care, love, and help a being,
Requires nothing more,
Than what you can provide.
We are all creatures of kindness.
All we need to do,
Is bring out that kindness.
All we need to do,
Is find what makes us capable.
Love, hope, kindness,
Are all matters of light.
All we need,
Is to find what makes us, us.
So now this poem ends,
And now I hope for goodness to follow.
Farewell,
And love to no end.
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Friends
Friends I adore.
Friends I love.
Though annoyance comes,
They're always by my side.
Always caring and lovable.
They come in different personalities.
They bring new chances and possibilities.
They are what I adore most.
I love my friends.
Till the end of time,
They shall be by my side.
I hope that there will never be a change of tide.
Even if we struggle with each other,
We are all connected.
We are friends.
We are all one.
When struggles come,
We pull together.
When bullies rise,
We fight as one.
I love my friends.
I adore my friends.
They are like family.
And that's why they stay by my side.
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Not many of you know the real me. I figured that I would start with how I look. I figured it was about time that a lot of you got to know the real me. Like many artists, I'm putting my face out there so that everyone would know me by looks. A few of you have gotten to know my personality through the many of chats that I've had with you. Now you have me for how I look.

I don't exactly have my glasses on though (yes I wear them). I took the picture with my computer and the screen glared off them. And I also realized that I don't photograph well. You also couldn't tell, but my long hair was combed back.

I'm one of those kinds of guys that likes to have long hair. It all kinda started off with me wanting to feel a lot like Sepheroth from Final Fantasy 7. Cause let's all admit for those that know of him, he was a total bad ass.

Anyway, that's me for you. Let it be clarified that my hair is only down to my shoulders so I'm not even remotely close to that level of hair. Take care of yourselves.
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Hello one and all!

Now, see here, a good friend of mine, goes by the name of Fluttershy21Draws, good artist by the way, is doing requests from her viewers and everyone else willing. If you have a piece of art you want requested, I ask you kindly to see if she is willing to go ahead and make it a reality.

Take care!
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  • Watching: music videos
  • Playing: Whatever I wish
  • Eating: Food
The pedals of a rose,
Color matters not.
Red, black, white, etc.

They fall when wilt,
For their time doth come.
Only for others to take their place.

The pedals of rose
Present beauty and tranquility.
Only when death comes are they most beautiful.

We do what must be done.
To preserve them we must.
So that we know not what their true beauty is too late.

The pedals of a rose
Represent a multitude of things.
Abundant in colors and meaning.

They are used for love more than anything.
These precious flowers
Are what we give to represent our love for another.

Our hearts are like the pedals of a rose.
Day after day, more and more pedals wilt.
Showing our fragile lives and the short time we own.

We give our hearts to those we adore and love.
But upon heartbreak,
Do we know the true color of our hearts.

Like Alice in Wonderland,
A rose can be painted.
Heartbreak threatens to paint a rose black.

This by far is true.
Many suffer the black paint.
The pain that is instituted within all humanity.

Darkness and despair
Threaten the lives of many.
This I say with a heavy heart, is true.

The pedals of a rose,
Gleaming bright and beautiful,
Until dark and desolated.

This is the fate of many.
Those who are beyond help.
The fate of the pedals of a rose.
Pedals of a rose
Something I tried to start back in March.
I didn't manage to finish it until my depression stage of grief through the ending of my first relationship.
I'm good now if any of you dare to ask. I thought I just put this out there.
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Hello one and all!

Now, see here, a good friend of mine, goes by the name of Fluttershy21Draws, good artist by the way, is doing requests from her viewers and everyone else willing. If you have a piece of art you want requested, I ask you kindly to see if she is willing to go ahead and make it a reality.

Take care!
  • Listening to: Whatever music I want to
  • Reading: Fanfictions
  • Watching: music videos
  • Playing: Whatever I wish
  • Eating: Food

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Sean Allison
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Welcome one and all.
I am the brilliant, and very smart, BalanceLord. I am a fanfiction writer. Please do not ask me for my own art other than literature. I will drop a bit of poetry here and there. But that's basically my limit. Because I've tried my hand at artistic designs and I stink.
Please comment on my work and tell me what you think.
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CapnRedIvan Featured By Owner 4 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yo slav boy you gay? y/n
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BalanceLord Featured By Owner 4 hours ago
No. Why?
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CapnRedIvan Featured By Owner 4 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you sure?
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BalanceLord Featured By Owner 4 hours ago
I'm very much into women.
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Fluttershy21Draws Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Hey I am doing request can you get the word out. Tell people to go to my journal that says Pick One pls 
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BalanceLord Featured By Owner May 15, 2017
I'll see what I can do Julia. When I have free time I'll send out a journal.
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Fluttershy21Draws Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Ok thanks for your help 
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BalanceLord Featured By Owner May 15, 2017
Anytime. I'm willing to help a friend.
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Fluttershy21Draws Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Hey have your heard of Ouran High School Host Club 
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BalanceLord Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017
Heard of it. Never had the interest to watch it.
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