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Rosario+Vampire A Vampire Love Story Ch 16
                                     Chapter 16
  (A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
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  “Are you certain you two are gonna be alright, Tsukune?” Tsukune’s mother asked worryingly.
  “Yes mother. I swear we’ll be alright.”
  “Tsukune and I will be just fine Miss Aono,” Moka chimed in.
  “Son, j-just take care of yourself. Please,” said the boy’s father.
  “I promise father.”
  With final words sha
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch 15
                                         Chapter 15
  (A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
  Tsukune attempted to settle his parents down after they went on question after question like “We taught you better!” and “You know better!” Tsukune now knew the time was midnight, upon the date of April 18. They had been stuck on that airship for what seemed like an eternity at the time. He let out a sigh of how much time he lost thanks to Kuyo and his mischief.
  “Dammit. He’s taken so much time away from us. For all I know, everyone’s out on a search party.”
  “And th
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Pedals of a rose
The pedals of a rose,
Color matters not.
Red, black, white, etc.
They fall when wilt,
For their time doth come.
Only for others to take their place.
The pedals of rose
Present beauty and tranquility.
Only when death comes are they most beautiful.
We do what must be done.
To preserve them we must.
So that we know not what their true beauty is too late.
The pedals of a rose
Represent a multitude of things.
Abundant in colors and meaning.
They are used for love more than anything.
These precious flowers
Are what we give to represent our love for another.
Our hearts are like the pedals of a rose.
Day after day, more and more pedals wilt.
Showing our fragile lives and the short time we own.
We give our hearts to those we adore and love.
But upon heartbreak,
Do we know the true color of our hearts.
Like Alice in Wonderland,
A rose can be painted.
Heartbreak threatens to paint a rose black.
This by far is true.
Many suffer the black paint.
The pain that is instituted within all humanity.
Dark
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch14
                                        Chapter 14
  (A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
  “Sir, there’s critical damage to the engines,” spoke one of the technicians to Kuyo.
  “Well fix them!” he barked.
  “We’re trying sir. But most of our men are focusing on the damage to the main structure. For now, we’re still afloat.”
  “Just make sure we’re still stable in the air!” he growled. “I want to make sure that we don’t crash down before I start my war.”
  “Yes sir.”
  The whole air ship was in an uproa
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch13
                                           Chapter 13
  (A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
  The vampires were trapped within their room the entirety of the next day. Luckily, the fox demon running the entire evil plot of world domination hadn’t hesitated to place a TV and assorted game systems in their room to keep them busy. But that didn’t stop Moka from walking around with cabin fever running through her system.
  “I can’t take it. I simply can’t.”
  “This can’t be the first time you’ve been held up captive on an enemy ship.”
  “At l
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch12
Chapter 12
Moka watched out the window of the room she was being kept in on the Fairy Tale hidden airship. The clouds below were white and seemed like pillows. But Moka couldn’t bring herself to smile given what has transpired. It was next to impossible for her to crack even a smirk for her, Tsukune, and her friends.
The door creaked open and she turned to see who would walk through. Tsukune wobbled inside with his head down low. She ran to him and held him in her arms. “What happened?”
“No one was harmed. The worst thing that transpired was me being hurt in front of them.”
“Oh Tsukune.” Moka instantly squeezed him in sadness.
Tsukune hugged back to comfort. “It’s alright. We’ve been in situations like this before. We’ll get out of them the same way.”
“How? Tsukune we can’t risk the lives of everyone.”
“I’m not saying we will. It’s only a matter of time. No plan goes without a fl
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch11
Chapter 11
‘Where am I? What’s going on? I can’t see anything.’ Tsukune questioned everything as he began to shake out of his unconscious state. His head hurt like someone hit him with a stereo. “Goddamn. I my head hurts like hell.”
“Tsukune?”
He heard Moka’s voice out of the dank darkness. “Moka? Moka, where are you?” he called out.
“I think I’m on your left. Because I hear you on my right. I can’t tell. Everything’s dark.”
“I think we’re blindfolded. Because my eyes are open and I can’t see. I can tell that much.”
“Tsukune, can you move your arms. I think mine are bound by ropes.”
“Same here. I think we’re suspended in mid-air.”
“I see a vampire’s sense of perspective isn’t so dulled after being exposed to a holy cross,” spoke a voice that made both vampires cringe upon each vocal.
“Ts-Tsukune, please tell
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch10
Chapter 10
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
The Saturday before Valentine’s Day started gloriously. At least for the vampire couple. The other girls, including Gin, couldn’t stand the lovey dovey stuff the two were doing day in and day out. To everyone else, they were being annoying, unruly, and overall…obnoxious.
“Please tell me that when Valentine’s Day is over that you’ll stop showing off your love life in our faces,” spoke Kurumu.
“Oh shut it. We just like to love each other. It is February after all. The month of love,” explained Moka.
“Yeah,” spoke Tsukune. “Let us have the month to express our love.”
“I think you guys express it enough with al
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch9
Chapter 9
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Like that one chapter some time ago, I added another made up character that will not make another appearance anytime soon. Take care and read on!)
The bar was actually a lot quieter than Tsukune thought. It was surprisingly calm with some soft jazz playing in the background. Moka’s father led them over to one of the tables set up by a window. He told Tsukune that he liked to see the monsters all roam about outside.
“So, Lord Akashiya,” Tsukune tried to take off the tension and awkward silence.
“My name is Issa Shuzen actually,” corrected the elder vampire. “I would’ve thought you knew that.”
“Right, right. Sorry. I’ve spent so much time using your daughte
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch8
Chapter 8
Another week to pass. The school year seemed to pass by rather quickly (honestly, who hasn’t thought so this far into their school lives?).  The gang of teenage monsters have already put aside all the drama.
“School year’s almost over!” shouted the blue-haired succubus.
“Not all of us are looking forward to it, Kurumu,” spoke Tsukune.
“How come?” questioned Ruby.
“I like to live in the here and now. The present, more than anything right now is bright and happy.”
“I agree,” Moka spoke with a large smile on her face.
“Where’s Yukari? She should’ve been here by now,” spoke Mizore.
And like a dog hearing its name being called, the little witch came through the door with a pale face as though she had seen a ghost. Ruby walked towards the child and tried to shake her out of her daze.
“Yukari? Is something the matter?”
“M-Moka, yo-your father is here.”
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch7
Chapter 7
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
More time had passed since the incident with Tsukune’s outburst. Even Christmas break passed by rather quickly. No one looked like they wanted to return after the incident. Now the month was January and everyone wore a scared face whenever the male vampire walked past them in the halls.
“This guy is going to be the headmaster after graduation?”
“He’s insane!”
“He’s off his rocker!”
“If he can’t control his anger, then he’s unfit to be headmaster.”
Tsukune heard it all in the first couple of weeks after school started back. His parents weren’t too thrilled about his outburst, but they showed him support about
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch6
Chapter 6
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. There is someone I made up to help with my plot for the chapter though. Take care and read on!)
Days soon passed into weeks. Weeks into months. Soon enough, the winter was upon them all. The snow began to fall upon the lands of the monster world. Everyone bundled up to keep warm. Even Tsukune did, even though vampires are more resistant to the cold than any other monster in the universe.
In the time that passed, the young boy looked back on the schoolyear so far. He and Moka finally got together in an actual relationship, he took her out on their first date on Halloween night, and more nights of love making, which now had to be kept to a minimum considering complaints that were given. He tried to push those embarr
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch5
Chapter 5
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
The following week passed by rather quickly for the students of Yokai Academy. Now the first week was over and done with. Tsukune had seen little of the girls after he told them off, but with him and Moka spending after class time together nonstop, it didn’t matter at all.
Now he sat on the roof, overlooking the campus grounds. The sky was clear. The campus was quiet. Everyone was either in class, or in the lunchroom eating.
He was only up there for quiet time. Not that being with Moka was disturbing him or anything. Tsukune only figured that he get time to himself every now and then, like every man has a right to in a relationship. But even without her by his side, he felt emotionall
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch4
Chapter 4
(A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)
The first day of the new year at Yokai Academy started off without a hitch. Nothing went wrong all day and all was peaceful. The staff told Tsukune that they’d take care of everything within the principal’s power until he graduated his final year. Now, the day was done and everyone was one their way to the dorms.
Tsukune stayed however. While everyone headed back to the dorms, he went to the principal’s office. The room was dark and the windows were painted dark purple. The room also carried an aroma of cinnamon and certain spices that reminded the young vampire of his mother’s cooking. He took in deep breaths to remember the scent.
“Tsukune?”
Tsukune tur
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Rosario+Vampire: A Vampire Love Story Ch3
Chapter 3
The sun shined through the window. It shined in the eyes of the silver haired vampire girl, thus awakening her from what seemed to be a blissful dream. Moka soon realized she wasn’t her bed. She found out she lay naked on the floor with someone’s arm wrapped around her.
She rolled over, careful as to try and not disturb who had their arm around her. Her eyes widened when realizing that Tsukune laid beside her. He too was also stripped down. What’s more is that his Holy Lock had been removed, giving him his own white, vampire hair. Her face lit up like a Christmas light and instantly burned by whatever wires emitted the bright light covered in red.
She told herself to move out of his grasp, but something told her not to move at all. Something called out that she needed to stay here. It spoke to her and said Tsukune’s grasp was her home. It was her own private island that granted everything she needed, when she needed it.
Tsukune lightly fidgeted though
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                                     Chapter 16
  (A/N: This story is purely fan-based. I hold no control over the characters, settings, or the overall franchise in general. The franchise and all its characters belong to the actual owners and I’m just here providing fan mail to the audiences of the franchise. Take care and read on!)

                                 (With the vampires)

  “Are you certain you two are gonna be alright, Tsukune?” Tsukune’s mother asked worryingly.

  “Yes mother. I swear we’ll be alright.”

  “Tsukune and I will be just fine Miss Aono,” Moka chimed in.

  “Son, j-just take care of yourself. Please,” said the boy’s father.

  “I promise father.”

  With final words shared amongst the male vampire and his parents, Moka and Tsukune transformed into their vampire forms and took flight, letting out a sonic shockwave that rumbled the neighborhood. Tsukune’s parents had nearly lost their balance thanks to it. (A/N: Yes, username pun intended there.) The vampires themselves flew upwards until they passed the cloud barrier of the sky. Thankfully the storm was over and the skies were becoming clear.

  After breaking past the clouds that were held above them, the vampire couple started flying to the east, towards the rising sun of a new day (A/N: Japanese pun if no one caught that). They followed the scent of flames that still lingered in the air, unfortunately for Kuyo, the rainstorm didn’t wipe the smell away from the atmosphere. They followed their laid out trail for hours before stopping at this small village in the woods, far from Tsukune’s hometown.

  “This looks like a good place to settle down for a while,” spoke the male vampire as he reattached his holy lock.

  “What is this place?” Moka asked quizzically.

  “I don’t know. Kinda looks like a small settlement area. I’ve heard of these places being nearby certain towns in Japan.” (A/N: No research done here. This is all part of the story’s plot.)

  “Really?”

  “Yeah. They’re mostly hidden in woodland areas. It’s next too impossible to find them without knowing where they are. I suppose that we found it by pure luck.”
The two started to walk into the small settlement and noticed how much larger the interior of the village was once they entered it. They saw a small bazaar looking area with different looking pottery and jewelry. The vampires were in aww and amazement of the scenery that was displayed before them. The buildings were cozy looking, large enough to house a small family of four at most.

  “Tsukune, this place is fascinating.”

  “I know.” The young male began daydreaming to himself what it would be like to raise a family with his vampire love. He shook his head away from the thought when he remembered everyone else is still in the bad guys’ hands.

  “Tsukune? What’s the matter, love?”

  “N-nothing. Just my imagination going AWOL,” he joked.

  “What were you imagining?”

  “A possible future for us. Just something to put into the bag for future reference,” he said with a small blush on his tanned face.

  “Oh,” was her only reply with a much bigger blush.

  Soon the residence of the village started pouring out of their respected houses. Every one of them stopped once they got sight of the vampire couple. The two in question just stood there as the villagers circled around them.

  “Please tell me you’re getting a Chitty Chitty Bang Bang kind of feeling right now?” Tsukune questioned.

  “What?”

  “You never saw that movie?”

  “Never even heard of that. A lot of time was spent locked away thanks to the rosary while my mother’s clone did all the walking around for us. And then that time was spent crying her eyes out through depression and then some studying when that dark phase of her life was done.”

  “Didn’t she have any time to watch movies?”

  “I think that question is best saved for when we aren’t being surrounded by a confused army of villagers.”

  “Good point.”

  Soon, one of the villagers began walking up towards the two with a sneer and angry scowl. “Who are you two and what are you doing in our village?” the angry villager asked.

  “We are sorry sir,” Tsukune spoke. “We just arrived by accident. I’m sorry that we intruded into your village without consent.”

  “My betrothed and I were just doing one of our annual hiking trips that we’ve done for the last 3 years,” Moka chimed in, giving Tsukune a huge blush at the word betrothed.

  “Without any supplies?” the villager asked.

  “We lost our way about 2 days ago and our supplies were all used up,” the female vampire lied. “Unfortunately we haven’t been able to find any roads or towns. Is there any way we can stay here for some time?”

  The elderly looking figure just gave a questionable look at the two and decided, “I will have to take this to the village council and have them decide your fate.” With his final words to the couple, the figure left them and everyone dispersed from their huge circle to continue their daily routine, while giving the couple the stink eye.

  “Betrothed?” Tsukune questioned.

  “It seemed to work at the time,” she replied.

  “Sometimes you scare me with how manipulative you can be.”

  “Manipulative? When have I been manipulative?”

  “I think scaring everyone into submission suffices in this case.”

  Moka wanted to retort but shook her head from side to side softly once she took into account how right he was. “Fair point. Good point actually. But admit it, you are just as scared of me.”

  “I am. But that doesn’t mean I don’t love you any less,” he said as he kissed the top of her head.

  The two let out a small giggle right before the same elderly figure came up to them and told them to follow him towards the council house at the village’s center. They walked for five minutes till they arrived at the designated building where the village’s council would dictate whether or not they stay. To be brief, Tsukune’s own heart was racing because of the tension. Sensing his discomfort, Moka squeezed his hand to calm him down. Tsukune took this and instantly leaned into her touch.

  The three people walked into the tiny building and stood before a council of four different middle aged people consisting of two women and two men. Their eyes shined with burning fires that had shown years of harsh experience. Instantaneously, both vampires lost all confidence and comfort in each other. They were in for the debate of their lives.

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Rosario+Vampire A Vampire Love Story Ch 16
Cliffhanger from a long absent writer.
Hello one and all! The lord of eternity, master of light and darkness, king of all things, has returned. I hope you are all pleased with my return, and my new chapter. Thank you all for your patience.
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Thank you all for being patient with my absences as a writer. My computer is slow and has problems actually registering my flash drive with all my fanfiction writings. So my progress is slow. I will have the next chapter of Rosario+Vampire soon. If not hopefully before the summer is out. Take care.
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Hi! Hello there! Just stopping by to say hello! :D (Big Grin)
I hope your June has been swell! :) (Smile)
Have a wonderful day~! La la la la
PS: I found you via the 'random deviant button' !!
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Heh. Well thank you for stopping by.
My June is going well so far. Thank you for caring.
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